can you write more, it was just a little short! I really liked it. Sex video This story was tight! Good use of metephors. can you write more, it was just a little short! Good work.«123» This story was tight! Well written, save for the spelling and grammar errors, but I only really pay attention to content. and fuck you rebel type you fucking stupid shitREADERReport 2006-04-18 18:41:3010 out of 10 and fuck you up the ass rebel type.READERReport 2005-12-10 15:02:21not bad story besides i like asian gurls they hott:P
rebel i got 1 thig to say STFUREADERReport 2005-07-26 03:34:13All of you just shut the fuck up dumbass’sREADERReport 2004-10-23 20:07:35Dude! Good use of metephors.
