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thanxREADERReport 2007-05-05 00:15:52The one thing I noticed, 2nd paragraph, he shouldn’t be 12 should he? The RED LIGHT DISTRICT was described correctly, but very briefly–Sitting in the windows with bare tits and very brief panties on. Sex video I misread it at first. It makes this story believable. The story is great and it is different from anything that I have read. It makes this story believable. 7/10
thanxREADERReport 2007-05-05 00:15:52The one thing I noticed, 2nd paragraph, he shouldn’t be 12 should he? I’m thinking he’s 21 and you reversed the letters, well written story otherwise.«1» Gave it a 10/10.READERReport 2007-05-05 02:29:11good story. 4 comments«1»READERReport 2007-05-09 19:19:30Cheers guy, good to get some feeedback, i willl be writing some more of our stories soon.READERReport 2007-05-05 19:32:26Reader of 5/5–You misread the info, he
