SOFT LAME ASS SHITREADERReport 2008-02-10 17:57:12didn’t mind grammar at all good story. puctuation, paragraph, uppercase letters look these things up in a dictionary. Hot sex video 10 comments«12»READERReport 2008-03-05 11:29:15WHAT A SHITTY ASS STORY THERE IS A THIN CALLED SPELL CHECK YOU MOTHERFUCKER NEXT TIME I SUGGEST YOU USE IT! And to the Moron that was complaining about a paragraph on mistakes. 10 comments«12»READERReport 2008-03-05 11:29:15WHAT A SHITTY ASS STORY THERE IS A THIN CALLED SPELL CHECK YOU MOTHERFUCKER NEXT TIME I SUGGEST YOU USE IT! Stop writing like you speak, and I hope to hell that you don’t speak the way you write because that would make you one ignorant fuck. You have a full keyboard too you impotent little person. And to the Moron that was complaining




















