This story suck, but then again most stories on this site is about one fifth the quality of the stories I usually read so maybe you shouldn’t take it as something negative… YOu made it so real I could almost taste it.’
GreatREADERReport 2004-07-21 19:00:22all the “try to be sensitive-stuff” seems a bit unnessesary considering the lame “I think I have a solution to your problem blablabla”. Hot sex video Could have used a bit more description of the physical appearances of the two, but the actual sex was good.READERReport 2004-08-04 13:30:14I loved it! Don’t forget to learn from others and their mistakes either, to be a great writer you should read alot, it helps when you are building sentenses.
