Con’s:
You need more dialoge during the sex because all you mainly did was describe it, your next story needs to have more dialoge during sex.«12345» the experience would have done you good LOLAnonymous readerReport 2008-12-19 10:39:59Good story.OrtsmaReport 2008-12-05 01:15:07″Never saw her again…”? What kind of shit is that? Hot sex video the experience would have done you good LOLAnonymous readerReport 2008-12-19 10:39:59Good story.OrtsmaReport 2008-12-05 01:15:07″Never saw her again…”? Con’s:
You need more dialoge during the sex because all you mainly did was describe it, your next story needs to have more dialoge during sex.«12345» the experience would have done you good LOLAnonymous readerReport 2008-12-19 10:39:59Good story.OrtsmaReport 2008-12-05 01:15:07″Never saw her again…”? Con’s:
You need more dialoge during the sex because all you mainly did was describe it, your next story needs to have more
