It was a good story and i didnt notice any grammatical errors that were obvious enough to see them in one read without scanning for them. The first commenter was a retarded jackass so just ignore him. Sex video but only if its in a positive sense. 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-07-26 22:46:18only a real ass would leave a story posted in this condition DELETE at once and rewrite it properly. It would be a bit better if there was the space between paragraphs because it can get a little bit confusing to the idiots who read it obviously :Danonymous readerReport 2012-03-28 09:26:21Fuck u dumb ass, apparently this is ur first time reading, see the indents on the end, in case u didn’t know thats where he took
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