My advice is to rewrite this and proof read it to make sure it works well before posting it. If you enjoy writing i say keep going, the more you write the better you’ll get, but please listen to people who give you advice on your writing, the’re only trying to help you. Sexvideo Really, you’re complaining about the spelling and grammar of a comment that you obviously had no trouble reading. I never said anything about the spelling or grammar of the story. If you’re going to write a scene like that give a reason why here friend and again describe it more, The location was also odd for it to happen, someone would have found or heard them.
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