At the start of the story, in the intro when you said you “write porn with a plot” first thought to come to my mind was “you write porn with pony ass”?Anonymous readerReport 2015-01-19 14:10:51Hey “COACH” – Mark Twain would never have published if editors had your attitude. Sex video Breathe is the verb, well, except in this sentence. Bad grammar and slang usage establish local color and help develop the characters. Breathe is the verb, well, except in this sentence. Good story, though.Anonymous readerReport 2016-11-16 14:42:02Nice job keep it upAnonymous readerReport 2016-09-03 03:31:01Sorry, I’m a Brony. Good story, though.Anonymous readerReport 2016-11-16 14:42:02Nice job keep it upAnonymous readerReport 2016-09-03 03:31:01Sorry, I’m a Brony. Good story, though.Anonymous readerReport 2016-11-16 14:42:02Nice job keep it upAnonymous readerReport 2016-09-03 03:31:01Sorry, I’m a Brony.
