good luck.” Who ever wrote that is a dumbass, insulting his grammar but not being good at it yourself, way TOO many errors to read not way to many. quit fuckin lying and learn grammar you fagREADERReport 2007-02-07 19:30:15″Get an editor or a friend to read your stories and clean them up. Sexvideo way to many errors in grammar and word usage to be enjoyable to read. the content seemed interesting and could make a nice story. the content seemed interesting and could make a nice story. Idiot.But yeah, the grammar in this story really did suck balls big time.READERReport 2007-02-03 05:09:40learn to write properly and quit making up bullshit«123» the content seemed interesting and could make a nice story.
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