9/10«12345» Since the author doesn’t know these things, he should let someone with some literary ability edit it for him before submitting it. I would never get dressed. Sex video lolanonymous readerReport 2012-01-10 08:41:15Very poorly written, lots of misspelled words, no quotes around what a person is saying. 59 comments«12345»spankedandknottedReport 2020-01-04 14:30:32I wish I was her. I got to it when it was all written so I spent a day reading it like a novel. Overall it was unbelieveable and childish and obviously fiction, true only in the writer’s dreams.purbratReport 2010-03-23 03:08:41great story! Overall it was unbelieveable and childish and obviously fiction, true only in the writer’s dreams.purbratReport 2010-03-23 03:08:41great story! 59 comments«12345»spankedandknottedReport 2020-01-04 14:30:32I wish I was her.
