And what is with all the damn commas where they’re not needed?«12345» CoachAnonymous readerReport 2015-06-27 04:47:47I’ve just recently been reading the author’s running story line. Rhiannon leaves in a few grammatical and spelling errors but nothing you can’t easily figure out.Anonymous readerReport 2014-10-11 05:31:05Long chapter of women drinking and bonding, drinking and shopping, drinking and becoming bi-sexual. Sex video I READ YOUR WORK WHEN FIRST POSTED AND HAVE THOUGHT ABOUT IT SINCE. Rhiannon leaves in a few grammatical and spelling errors but nothing you can’t easily figure out.Anonymous readerReport 2014-10-11 05:31:05Long chapter of women drinking and bonding, drinking and shopping, drinking and becoming bi-sexual. I was enjoying them until I got to this one. That, along with everything else (including the atrocious grammar) ruined the entire plot for
