8 comments«12»READERReport 2007-02-11 04:47:39good one – don’t change your style its excitingly differentREADERReport 2007-02-05 04:26:54People saying it’s hard to read must not read very well. it doesn’t have a flow because of the ‘scrpt’ type of writing. Hot sex video it doesn’t have a flow because of the ‘scrpt’ type of writing. This MS had no trouble reading it.READERReport 2007-01-03 19:47:27ok everyone…the point of this story is to be written in the way its written…im not gonna change it into paragraphs, that would destroy the point of it being a REAL roleplay lolREADERReport 2007-01-03 13:37:35it 2 hard to follow like that need to rewrite in to paraghesREADERReport 2007-01-03 12:14:42Very tough to read. You’ve got the idea just make it easier to read.«12» it doesn’t have a flow because of the ‘scrpt’
