There were some spelling errors but nothing that really took away from the story.Only thing is try and format it better so that it’s easier to read. Other than that, a job well done, and I’m looking forward to more chapters. Sex video I do agree though that it would be interesting if Axel somehow ends up being a werewolf.anonymous readerReport 2012-04-02 21:31:45I have to agree with the rest of the comments here. Wonderful story, amazing plot line. I do agree though that it would be interesting if Axel somehow ends up being a werewolf.anonymous readerReport 2012-04-02 21:31:45I have to agree with the rest of the comments here. ~ Ashanonymous readerReport 2012-03-30 15:53:53really great story please continue but can axel turn into a human because he is a
