Knowing when to put in quotes and how make the reader know for sure who’s sayin’ what. Seriously the only reason it’s gettin’ such low rating marks, is it’s so totally screwed up grammar wise.anonymous readerReport 2011-11-15 10:05:28Your writing sucks. Hot sex video I really do like the concept of this story. I’ve got no complaints on the story line by itself. IF ONLY it were laid out differently. Knowing when to put in quotes and how make the reader know for sure who’s sayin’ what. With help, I hope you finish it. I go along with all the other people that are not happy with your grammar. IF only there was a way to get in touch with you and have you send me the story,
