61 comments«12345»X-MAN215Report 2021-01-16 04:09:47THX LUV ITAnonymous readerReport 2016-08-06 18:18:49Great story!!!Anonymous readerReport 2016-07-14 04:14:29I find there are issues with spelling, grammar and word choice. Sex video …but not enough to fret over, just would suggest having a proofreader/editor for your future efforts… Now, I don’t know how much Emily knows of her apparent future brother-in-law, so this can probably be passed off as an unknowing girl trying to be formal with his nickname. But in the future, try to be careful about confusing things like names…bad spelling and grammar I can forgive, but a sudden name change has me wondering what I missed or if this was just some cobbled up cut-n-paste effort plagiarized from another site.
