Punctuation? And check out the rest of her stories. Sex video I doubt. Ever heard of it? Look at the ratings and the reads. “You should slow it down” Maybe you should, dude. Probably more than you could ever get. “You should slow it down” Maybe you should, dude. Ever heard of it? And to Agothgreendaygirl, keep up the good work sweetie.anonymous readerReport 2012-11-09 09:16:20Had heaps of potential you could be an amazing writer but you jujmped around you moved the story along to fast details were good during sex but thats about it you should slow it down also you threw in some unnessacary stuff like the part about battle scalrs and whats his faces back you shoulodnt mention any details unless your going to
