Didn’t notice any spelling or grammar issues and the plot was good… Hot sex video i didn’t comment on the story just the presentation. this story cry’s out for a deletion and a repost.«1» I’ve seen WAY worse on this site and I quite enjoyed it. 5 comments«1»singleagain1692Report 2012-04-24 10:27:08Your first story was done well.Now do anotherNateJohnsonReport 2012-04-24 02:05:27So fucking sexy babygirl! i didn’t comment on the story just the presentation. i asked for a repost is all. Keep it up!anonymous readerReport 2012-04-23 04:58:44spacing spacing spacing. this story cry’s out for a deletion and a repost.«1» Didn’t notice any spelling or grammar issues and the plot was good… enough said. i asked for a repost is all. in a format that is easier to read.anonymous readerReport 2012-04-23 22:09:54Ignore the idiot
