I’d really hate to see this story end before it had a chance to be a really good story. With help, I hope you finish it. Sex video 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-11-19 19:46:30I agree, this has the makings of a really nice romantic story. Seriously the only reason it’s gettin’ such low rating marks, is it’s so totally screwed up grammar wise.anonymous readerReport 2011-11-15 10:05:28Your writing sucks. Seriously the only reason it’s gettin’ such low rating marks, is it’s so totally screwed up grammar wise.anonymous readerReport 2011-11-15 10:05:28Your writing sucks. I go along with all the other people that are not happy with your grammar. IF only there was a way to get in touch with you and have you send me the story, let me make corrections,
