Maybe if you made it into a chapter story it’d be better, and not so hurried. Other than that, though, wonderful job.READERReport 2008-02-11 11:23:19I liked it Steph, I don’t have a sexy friend. Xxx sex video So great! Maybe if you made it into a chapter story it’d be better, and not so hurried. Will you be mine?READERReport 2007-10-28 14:15:35So sick and stupidREADERReport 2004-08-12 13:59:49stupid«1» Also, I hate to be a grammar nazi, but the continuous flow, instead of proper paragraphs with the dialogue make it difficult to read. The flow could use work and it could have been lnger though.anonymous readerReport 2012-02-02 01:13:17I liked it, though I’d think better of it if it were longer. Maybe if you made it into a chapter story it’d be better, and not
