8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-07-31 11:14:58no paragraphs and you started in the middle of the story this shoould have been chapter two out of three delete and rewrite and use a good editor from now onanonymous readerReport 2011-04-20 20:54:58EVER HEARD OF PARAGRAPHS ? Hard to imagine the son and daughter having enough energy after all the sex activity, to play sports of any kind. Sex video THIS NEEDS A MAJOR REWRITE USING A GOOD EDITORREADERReport 2007-06-06 16:17:09start from the beginning, this would be a great part 2 or 3.READERReport 2007-05-17 07:09:23Great story. She kept a robe by the back door for when she had to hang clothes on the line in their back yard.




















