so I will give this story series an overall 5/10. You should had added more parts.Anonymous readerReport 2016-06-30 21:55:58Please do more the best stories I’ve ever read PleaseMerc098Report 2016-03-31 08:25:36ok so apart from the spelling and grammar errors, your story has much to be desired. Sexvideo Which in fact was rather annoying and I had to skip most of that scene since you kept using “She” to acknowledge both women. But didn’t like the Cliffhangers at the end though. You should clarify which was doing what thus allowing better understanding of the situation. Also shit way to end it. so I will give this story series an overall 5/10.
