In some ways you have the skills, you just need a better story. including the thunder storm? Sexvideo Sheesh…why in the fuck are so many people obsessed with getting every character in every fucking story pregnant?!?!?anonymous readerReport 2011-09-18 03:29:31You saved me a lot of hsalse just now.SequoiaReport 2008-07-02 14:40:19Keep fucking Amber and Ashley and get them both pregnant. In some ways you have the skills, you just need a better story. making the 15 yo girls a little insecure, adding some physical quirks, something to make them more real. On the flip side, your writing was well composed, the descriptions were OK and the sex was pretty well put together. Nonetheless, you seem to have a decent hand.
